Commendable efforts.
As you asked for an honest opinion , here's mine ...
The project started rather dry as it pointed out things which were implied.
Things turn around only after page 16 when the managerial side of the character is revealed.
Now, I think there was unjustice done to the description of Karana by saying he climed to the top of the ladder but couldnt balance it out. But then everyone has their own views.
My view would be that karana was the kind of corporate who was a philantrophist. Altough he partnered with the bad guys, he always gave priority to social responsibility and valued their shareholders (kindof).
All in all, a lot of things to learn from. Use the base of this project in your sixth sem subject IMTP .. attachment detachment etc.