"OUR PATH IS FULL OF BLISS........."

"Be good & all will leave you,



i'm good ,when i'm one with myself,

& in that goodness all my negative emotions leave me,

i don't leave them........."

"we are expected to follow certain spiritual rules of the land. I figured out that a match signifies our life. "Winning" or "Loosing" these are merely two ,which walks always along us,it's unreval our conscience. Then we play a game of life,following the rules of game..........."

"Rendering help to another is the function of all being human...."

selfness service alone gives the needed strenght

& courage to awaken the real you sleeping in your heart........"

"Mirror is the internal beauty,

if u get the path of creepy....."

"Thing;s that are bad for the people

are bad for the life,who think;s GOD isn;t alive............."



"Human action's can't be reduced to the nature's unfortunities,



but effort's can be included in all opportunities,

coz..to the ruler , the people'a are heaven to do their external duty,

but to the people , only the FOOD is heaven to make their internal beauty.............."

"Loosing" isn;t an obstruction across the country's every site,

& "Winning" isn't a deduction of ur life,

if u wanna grow up with these fluctuations of life,

u should have to learn about how to make a sharp knife............."

 

[Simran Rai]

This poetic piece reflects a profound stream of introspection, blending spirituality, human values, and the philosophy of life. It flows like a series of contemplative verses, stitched loosely around themes of goodness, inner awakening, the duality of success and failure, and the beauty of selfless service. The central message emphasizes that:​

• True goodness comes from being at peace with oneself, not from external validation.​
• Winning and losing are not ultimate truths but mere companions on the journey, and life is best lived by honoring the rules of inner conscience.​
• Selfless service is not just noble but necessary — it awakens strength and connects one to deeper purpose.​
• Inner beauty is reflected in one's choices, and following a shallow or “creepy” path clouds the mirror of the soul.​
• Human effort can elevate fate; rulers may see people as assets, but people value the basic need — food — as their divine sustenance.​
• Defeat and success are not ends in themselves. Growth comes by understanding life’s edges — like sharpening a knife.​

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