Lets compete in shayaris

Akash_arny

Akash_arny

Arun Kumar Khedia
Hi guys, just a thought cam in my mind of starting a competition in which a line or two of a shayari will be given and u have to complete it and give another for the next person to right. i hope u will enjoy and will participate.

here's the first one by me:

Yu aayino se kab tak dil behlaoge
jab andhera hoga to khud ko tanha paoge
 
gaurav200x said:
Mai to pawan ka jhoka hun, yun jaane naa dena
warna anth mein bahut pachtaoge ;)
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well written gaurav but u forget to put next uncomplete shayari. well ok i'll do it than

next:- Har taraf khamoshi ka saya hai,
Zindagi me pyaar kisne paaya hai,
 
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Har taraf khamoshi ka saya hai,
Zindagi me pyaar kisne paaya hai,[/B]
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pyaar jisne paaya hai,
woh kaha kabhi khamosh reh paaya hai

arny tuhi line de..........shaayri mein tuhi achaa hai.....
 
MAXDROIT said:
pyaar jisne paaya hai,
woh kaha kabhi khamosh reh paaya hai

arny tuhi line de..........shaayri mein tuhi achaa hai.....
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arey venky yaar line to main banaa ke de dungaa pur mujhe bhi to chance milna chahiye na, BTW good try.

Next:-
Doston ki mehfil main akela rehtaa hoon
mera dard e gum ro ro ke peeta hoon
 
Akash_arny said:
Doston ki mehfil main akela rehtaa hoon
mera dard e gum ro ro ke peeta hoon
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lekin jab pyaar saath mein ho toh,
whisky ho ya rum........dono chun chun ke peeta hu
 
Namkeen Pani toh fir bhi gum ka nasha pee jaata hai
Par khoon k aanso tanha dil bhi nahi seh paata hai
 
kartik said:
Namkeen Pani toh fir bhi gum ka nasha pee jaata hai
Par khoon k aanso tanha dil bhi nahi seh paata hai
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awesome, accha joda kartik.

NEXT:

Khoon ke aansoo pena aasaan nahin hota,
izhaar -e- ishq kurna aasaan nahin hota,
 
Khoon ke aaso fir bhi hum pee ke jee lete..
izhaar -e- ishq na kare sake toh jaan hi hum de dete ;)
 
kartik said:
Khoon ke aaso fir bhi hum pee ke jee lete..
izhaar -e- ishq na kare sake toh jaan hi hum de dete ;)
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well i'll say that u tried but i didnt went in that manner in which it should be ok next one:

Tu jaise ek gulaab ka phool hai,
aur main jaise ek bhanwraa..............
 
Juda hone ka gum yeh shaam bhi na bhula pae
Aab toh jaam bhi nahi sunti meri daastan.
 
shehzad_rocks said:
guys come on complete this one

Na Humne Wafa Nibahi,
Na Tumne Wafa Nibahi
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Phir bhi bin tere mujhe sataati hai tanhai,
pyaar kurta hoon tumse ub bhi,
pur jaan leti hai tujhse yeh judaai.

Next one:-
jaam pe jaam piye jaa raha hoon
tujhse main purda kiya jaa raha hoon........
 
Akash_arny said:
Phir bhi bin tere mujhe sataati hai tanhai,
pyaar kurta hoon tumse ub bhi,
pur jaan leti hai tujhse yeh judaai.

Next one:-
jaam pe jaam piye jaa raha hoon
tujhse main purda kiya jaa raha hoon........
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Bekaabu hai dil fir bhi jiye jaa raha hu,
khali hai botal fir bhi piye jaa raha.


Next one:-
Badalna aata nahi hum ko mausamoo ki tarha,
Har ek roop main tera intezaar karte hain,
 
shehzad_rocks said:
Next one:-
Badalna aata nahi hum ko mausamoo ki tarha,
Har ek roop main tera intezaar karte hain,
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najane kitne roop badal liye,
ab toh ajja....ab toh mausommone ne bhi badlan chod diya
 
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